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I finished the first Volume for TGK - Secrets of an Custodian today, what means that i will publish the first chapters in a pack when i'm finished with it.

I started the progress of TGK around 2006- after watching the first movie of Pirates of the Carribean.

My first idea to make a 'copy' of it, but with my own characters. Because it did sounded unoriginal,and i hadn't any idea's, i scrapped it.

The next thing was: I was browsing at some costumes,and other fanfictions of other people,and starting to create my first Pirate Oc: Anette. In first place, i liked her, but it began to start be boring,so i stopped again with it.

After watching other movies around the plot with 1600/1700, i designed my official characters,and started to began with my story.
( that was in 2008. )

Original story:
The story takes his place in the year 1710, where pirates kills each other violently, and takes the treasures and money from other innocent people. There where created Custodians, by an godess to save the people who they must protect. Custodians must seal the 'murder pirates' and takes the black magic out of them. One day,there is comes an pirate,known as the strongest of the seven seas. The pirate named Rosette would like to protect her people,but they misunderstand her. The people pushed her and her crew away because they are scared of pirates.


This revolves around a woman named Lita, who is known as a notorious pirate, while she actually is not. The people confuse her with Lita's mother who was the first captain. Lita is nowhere more welcome since they know her, and the corporal and the police try to capture her. Lita escapes, but there is a guy, and he is in love with her. The boy called David, and would love to know what secrets she keep hidden. Besides this, Lita must complete a goal, and kick her rival, Adriane off. They also came with 3 other people in contact, -including 1 shipwrecked girl -who go along with Lita. Thus Lita begins her new target with a group of people and she does her best to get everything to focus on 1 thing: Make sure that the others did not come behind her identity.

Cast:

Lita Smitch - Also known by her surname, known as infamous pirate, but is misunderstood. Her family died,and she is still searching for them.

David Rooiy - Known as a guy who isn't comfortable with romance and that kind of stuff, believes in unbelievable things like magic.

Adriane Bloodheart - Known as redhead, or a colonell pirate. She has a don't care personality, and can be easily pissed of.

Mentha Dizora/Mizu - A young woman with green hair,who spend most of her time to care for the nature and living creatures. Her most noticable thing is her green unsymmetrical hair.


Rhode Dizora/Mizu - The best friend/fiance of Mentha. He lives together with her in a dark wood,and can manipulate light.

Mia Shiroi - A girl who lost her parents during a storm accident on sea. She acts like a little child, and have a passion for flowers.

Richard Bloodheart - Adriane's father,and captain of his own crew. He lost his wife in a fight, and want to take revenge on Smitch, since he thinks it's all her fault.

Minor cast:

Rosette Smitch - Lita's mother,and a captain known as the one who murders. It's unknown if she's still alive.

Queen Eutopia - The woman who made her 'Children' called Custodians. She doesn't show herself, since she is a ghost.





Program details:


Program used:

Photoshop CS5

Paint Tool Sai


Photomanipulation, and stock credit:


Lita - Penelope Cruz, and handdrawn costume

David - Orlando Bloom, costumes from Google

Adriane - Amy Childs, handdrawn costume

Mentha - Keira Knightley, costume from google

Rhode - Cosplay picture from Google, handdrawn costume

Mia - Stock picture from : ~A68Stock


Ship picture taken and edited from Pirates of the Caribean recent cover art.

Golden paper roll from Google.

TGK belongs to me.

( C ) Peachy1100