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December 29, 2012
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When i have a cover,i also need a back,don't i?

Since i couldn't change the color of the text, i used a piece of old paper,and i must say that it looks nice.

I introducted Adriane only here, to let it look like a book back.

The skull came of course back,and the sea background.

The texture around the cover is a brush picture i found in Microsoft Word by searching for 'skull.' Weird, but fine with me.



Texture paper by =ftourini

Adrianes model is of course Amy Childs.

Critiques and comments are welcome.

(c) OceanPirate
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Critique by *TrueRageXRT Dec 29, 2012, 11:25:47 AM
First off, that old parchment as a backdrop for the text is perfect, that is a great idea to make it readable and fit the story. Another good bacjground with the character added in looking pretty natural. Your skill seems to have gotten better than the older front cover you did before. I almost didn't notice the skull, the darkened edge effect blends it in very nicely. The story seems very intriguing, with the custodians it adds something difffernet to make it mroe than a plain pirate story. I do notice some grammar issues, like it should have 'an Earth Custodian' instead of just 'a'. Also this sentence seems awkward when reading it, I don't get good flow in the word choices. 'If this fails, she get threatened with death by people in the town where she often was as child and spend her life before piracy.'
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